SENT TO CLIENT-
FEEDBACK -
like this one -
'Maybe introduce heart valves coming off the type, so that the overall type composition feels like it's actually the beating heart, but not overly literal.'
I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THIS MEANS, AND THE DEADLINE IS TOMORROW
-is it possible to redo it?
-what do valves look like?
try to meet clients in person in the future as easier to understand what they mean
OTHER EDITS -
SUBMISSION-
RULES -
A1
YELLOW, BLACK AND WHITE ONLY (100% OF EACH COLOUR)
sent -
-sent over the range so they can jugde
FINAL CRIT FEEDBACK-
'like the design'
'change the yellow'
'make a heart with the background colour?'
'make the text smaller'
'freedom is spelt wrong'
'dont like the valve thing'
FINAL SUBMISSION-
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