505 Design Practise 2 - Studio Brief 1- Digital Mock/Crit

Digital Mock ups 1

main ideas -

For this interim crit for this brief will be used to received feedback on the current the mock up of the design idea, this is to get feedback on which idea to develop more for the final outcome. Which is most cultural appropriate, which fits the the aim of this brief, which set the playful tone in a postive tone.

feedback
like the top left but it's very restrictor
doesn't reflect Chinese design as this as a lot for curveature it
bottom appeal more to younger audience due to colour scheme and brightness
top left is very constrictive, it looks really dull, too formed
other design are more open, more community based,
bottom one reflect the tone aim for more effectively
top design seem very formal and mature
bottom designs seem more free and positive
the bottom left wouldn't be suitable for normal brief as there not information but could work for this outcome
the background on the bottom right give depth of field to the forms, makes it seem as more like the lanterns in the dark at the park
top right represented fantasy land, like a festival event and magical event
dots represent the bulbs at the event

From this crit the style that will be explored more the the design outcome will be the more illustrative styles, the top left was seen as too formal and adult for the child based event whilst not fitting with the tone aimed for therefor is not suitable for this outcome.