406 Studio Brief 1 - Secret Seven, Crit Feedback 2

Second Crit Feedback for this brief 

As for this brief a lot of design ideas/idea created before being developed further the needed to be refined to find out which where the most popular, this would make sure that the ideas that are worked on are the best rather than wasting time on idea that the audience felt were not as strong.

For this the ideas where explained along with imagery, drawn sketches ect to help the audience understand the concept behind the styles as well as focusing on the artist final out comes aesthetically quailty.

simplified feedback - 
japanese idea -
great concept
final outcome doesn't look as good as expected
pot on its own works better
concept needs explaining though, will people understand
doesn't look like normal record sleeves, not sure if thats good or bad

eye ideas -
favourite eyes idea over all
different link that adds emotions
links to theory well (well researched)
creates a sad feeling
associated with deep/meaning

chemical idea
try experimenting with chemical shaking 27 times
good that its said as many time as in the song
good visual language
try mono printing this style
very visually pleasing

colours -
red seem more like anxious effect not blue to some people
some people relate the song to blue more
different people would use different colours
blue - calming/sad
red - violent, scary, health

drawn idea -
eye looks very effective for a cover
the swearing isn't suitable
don't like the drawn person idea
don't take the person idea further

watercolours -
water colour idea reflect how anxiety is seen as a wave
its free/natural
its powerful yet organized
thats how i would discribe how panic attacks feels
it look like the physically effect on the brain
contrast works well
colour make it attract
looks pretty
different
never seen a style like it before
abstract style would work for cover without name

over all work now -
make sure i leave the person idea
focus on working on the ideas i have rather than new ones
people like covers with faces on them
chemical symbol should be worked on more
chemical symbol moving idea test
try mono print idea
make it abstract for this cover
make it either sad or bright
PEOPLES VIEWS ON ANXIETY ARE VERY DIFFERENT
everyone has different opinions on how they want it reflected
Japanese idea isn't that good visually maybe leave it out