Final Crit/Feedback
For the book the final book i have got feedback on the design and the content of the book in its final form, this is to that se what i could improve next time and how i can learn for this brief.
'i don't think eating a raw egg is that health'
'the colour works well to seem calm and refreshing'
the dot are a design aspect seen into a lot of work recently and it relate all to this brief'
'maybe din is a bit too formal for this book and harsh'
'the design have be balanced and works out well so each page is different but not over powering'
'why is just one part of the text white'
'the colour scheme is the best part, it really reflect what you aimed for'
' the over all aesthetically look is good'
'i'd use it, it appeal to me'
'good use of illustration, its seen but not too heavy'
'i'd same of the contrast are still too high but i guess otherwise it wouldn't be readable'
'i like it, the design seems calming to me'
over all this brief has allowed me to focus on the work of a calming design style and i feel this feedback reflect the aim of the book as their are so personal design issues that would be changed but over all the colour scheme and style seems fit for the purpose and the general feedback was positive therefore this outcome has been kind of successful. it does have a down fall with tis the page with the egg quote, i don't like the deign of this page and the text, the design is too heavy and seem to too much like kath kidson style deign.
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